28.11.10

Proposal feedback



your reserach proposal is in a much better shape but you need to still work out some bits like:
- in justification you have removed the heads given. you need to put your explanation under each head. right now its ok but when you write the other way you would get to understand it and justify it better
 
- also your second question needs to be re-framed. not really clear what you are trying to achieve through it.

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